Brian Pilkington

thanks for the info. i have changed Count Drachunts name to Count Dasgan. how do you think this sounds. i've also added my chapter 2, if you'd like to read ...

i absolutely love it. i think it flows great. i would love to read more of your stuff. its fantastic. i have one thing to say: i think it could ...

i think this is great. it really moved me. i like poems and would like to see some more of yours. keep up the great writing.

i thought the start was very good. makes the reader want to read on. i liked the rest of it too. you've obvously thought about his alot. continue writing, this ...

I liked it, but at first didn't, until i read on. It only picks up in the middle of the chapter. hHowever i do like the characters, and the way ...